<To English clinic participants
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作者:微笑的魅力 人气值:28 回复数：13 发表时间：2006-9-19 11:15:
I seldom write essays in public due to I am not good at writting!:)But in order to support teacher Patrick's English clinics and achive win-win target,I am going to write sth.
National Day & Mid-Autumn Day are approaching,we have 9-day holiday,but I haven't made up my mind where to go on my holiday,I planed to go home to visit my parents,but considering I have a get-together during the holiday,so I posted one big box of mooncake to my parents instead for expressing my filial piety.:)

On this Thursday evening,our company is going to hold a BBQ party to celebrate the coming two festivals,the children of my colleagues will give us some performance and some of my colleagues will show their stunts.:)

I am so exciting about the coming party,do you know why?:)

I almost forget that Teacher Patrick ever promised me to answer the most valuable questions I mentioned ? I would not like to expect teach Patrick to be a promise-breaker!:)>

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Edited version:

I seldom write essays in public forums like this one as I am not good at writing, but in order to support our teacher Patrick’s English Clinics, and also to be in a win-win situation, I have now written something as follows.

The National Day and Mid-Autumn Festival are approaching, and we have a nine-day holiday, but I have not made up my mind on where to go during this holiday. I have considered going back to my hometown to visit my parents, but in view of the fact that I have a get-together during the holiday which I do not want to miss, I finally just sent them one big box of mooncakes instead to show my filial piety.

On this Thursday evening our company is going to hold a BBQ party to celebrate the two forthcoming festivals. At the party the children of our colleagues will entertain us by giving some performance, while some colleagues will do that by showing their stunts.

I am so excited about this forthcoming party. Do you know why?

I almost forget that Teacher Patrick has promised me to answer the most valuable question I asked. I hope Teacher Patrick would not be a promise breaker!

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Thanks for writing in, Alexandra. You can write so well (especially for your young age) that it is a big waste if you do not write more often, and also try to improve on your written English. You need never worry that I do not keep my promise, but I did not say I will reply that question after seeing just one essay from you, did I? Haha! Morever, why should such a young girl like you need to bother about rules and habits that slow aging at all??? I expect and hope older women, perhaps those twice your age to be curious or keen on that mostly.