主题： 回复:Written English Clinic - 01-0906
作者：还是喜欢东北人
回复时间：2006-9-7 0:36:26 人气值：1
I'm so appreciate that you can correct my sentences.Sorry ,I am busy these two days,but I will come here everyday if can .It's really so nice of you .It's a very good chance to practice writing.I also want to know your English name.Would like you tell us?And one more thing,I write an advertisemnt for our English Conversition Club.Would you please correct it properly for me?Thank you very much.There are just few poeple here,and my English is poor,you guys,please don't mention that.

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I am so grateful that you can correct my essays. I am sorry that I have been busy these past two days, but I will be around everyday when I can. It is really so nice of you. This gives us a very good chance to practice writing in English. I also want to know your English name. Would you tell us? And one more thing: I have written a draft for an advertisement for our English Conversation Club. Would you please correct it for me? Thank you very much. There are a few people who know me here, and I hope these people would not laugh at my rather poor English, and mention to others that I am seeking help here.

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还是喜欢东北人. What is your English name then? I will correct your English Coversation Club draft tomorrow as it is very late now.